In today's class, we again had a critique of each other's work. I had been working on this quite a bit over the last week, although the downside to my work was that I didn't realise that every spread had to have a similarly structured layout, so every building had a different layout, just a similar aesthetic.
When comparing the feedback I received with my initial concepting checklist, I realised that I wasn't at all conveying what I had set out to do. I was wanting quite a spacious, sophisticated book, although I wasn't conveying that at all yet.
Along with that, Fay gave me a lot of pointers on what to change and how to go about it. I'm going away to Australia for the holidays, although I'll make sure that once I get back I get a lot of development on my design, so that for week five's class it is really well refined, and then it will only be crafting left to do.
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